By Rich
Lowry
Sunday,
July 30, 2023
I
listened to almost all of the Lincoln Dinner speeches from Friday.
One
thing that struck me was the amount of policy consensus there was. You could
have put almost all the policy issues in a blender (debt, low taxes, China,
Bidenomics, the border, U.S. weakness abroad, abortion, men competing in
women’s sports, weaponized law enforcement), mixed them up, then evenly
distributed them among all the candidates, and the policy mix in the speeches
would have largely stayed the same.
Also, I
liked pretty much all the speeches, so I’m going to grade like a college
professor who’s too eager to get good reviews from his students.
Trump: A-
(or D, depending on your standard)
A “D”
would be appropriate if you minded the rank pandering, the ridiculous account
of the trade war with China and how it supposedly benefited U.S. farmers,
election denialism, and the reading of poll results. That, though, would make
you different from most Republican voters.
Trump is
not at his strongest working from a script in a short format. Still, he was
Trump, so naturally he got a huge reaction.
Regarding
the pandering: He’s always been blatant in his appeal to whomever he’s trying
to win over, and it usually works. He has also always read from polls, but in
this case they are relevant, since part of the argument against him is that
he’d lose to Biden in a general. He was at his strongest drawing the contrast
in results between how Biden campaigned and how he has governed.
As
always, he filled the stage. He felt a little like the incumbent president
who’d done everyone the favor of showing up at a small-time event.
He was
energetic and spoke with conviction. He also showed signs of widening out his
message. He talked more about economics and put that up front in his remarks.
That’s all to the good. His core argument that Republicans need to get it done
in 2024 and he’s the one to do it is cogent and remains plausible.
I think
he’d really benefit, though, from having a truly accomplished speechwriter
write a big set speech for him at some point, and then, as he campaigns, he can
draw on it for riffs and lines that suit him and integrate them into remarks in
his own voice. As it is, his attempts at humor at the beginning of his speeches
are always flat and his attempted rhetorical flights at the end are always a
bunch of jammed-together clichés. It’d be easy to bring the oratory to a higher
level — and put his message in an even better light — without being
inauthentic. Why not do it?
The
senator understands the power of story-telling, and has a lot of good ones to
tell. He’s still in the introducing-himself-to-people stage and has done a good
job of it, this speech included. But what makes his message distinctive,
besides the cheerfulness? Plus, he really needs to flesh out his policy
positions to avoid the sense that his campaign is all about his personal story.
Getting
people to like him is a great foundation for growth, and he’s already been
ticking upwards. He can’t rely on that alone to get him to the next level,
though.
Vivek
Ramaswamy: A-
He’s a
very adept speaker, fluid and pointed. He talks about first principles
compellingly. The way he used the American Revolution to make the case for a
MAGA message, though, was a little hard to take, as well as his retreated
references to the end of his second term in January 2033. The brief reference
to what really happened on January 6 was noxious. And his juxtaposition of
reform — what the sell-outs favor — and revolution — what he’ll supposedly
bring — was over the top. Still, he helped himself and I’d still be surprised
if he doesn’t have a moment and become a bigger problem for DeSantis, Scott, or
someone else.
Some
other observations:
Mike Pence — He delivered a classic
social-conservative message, and, as usual, was earnest and sincere. He
deserves better than he’s getting so far from Republican voters.
Doug
Burgum —He
made a real nice pitch for himself. He represents the opposite end of the
spectrum from DeSantis, at least to this point, though — completely neglecting
the culture.
Nikki
Haley —
Everything she said was great, but she has the same problem as Tim Scott —
what’s distinct?
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